When an editor asks you to shorten your work by 15% it’s not out of cruelty, although it might seems so.
Here’s an easy fix to trim down and help avoid head n’ heartache: cut adverbs and consider removing the words listed below. If the sentence conveys what you intended (or you’re inspired to be more precise), you don’t need the word.
a bit, absolutely, actually, about, all, almost, and, any, are, around, as, at, awful, basically, because, begin, but, can, certainly, completely, definitely, down, even, feel, go, hate, it, just, how, literally, little, much, not, of, okay, one, or, ponder, probably, quite, rather, realize, really, replied, said (or other dialogue tag – describe character action or trait instead), seem, so, some, somehow, somewhat, sort of, start, still, that, the, then, think, this, those, thoughtfully, time, totally, understand, up, very, virtually, wonder
(Adapted from: Creative Writing from Wesleyan University/Coursera)